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505kings last edited by
keep the spirit, always nice to see someone making a vid/film with a message
I would say you have the potential to do more, so keep creating!
jonandsn last edited by
I really like it, the idea is good, the message is really nice. however, if I were you I'd look into some of the continuity errors you made; GTA gameplay is from PC, but he plays a PlayStation, and how the homeless guy has only one shoe the first time we see him, but then he has two shoes when the main character sees him outside the window. Also, the pacing is a bit slower than it could have been and the audio is a bit inconsistent. Otherwise, great short film. I really enjoyed it.
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