I really like it, the idea is good, the message is really nice. however, if I were you I'd look into some of the continuity errors you made; GTA gameplay is from PC, but he plays a PlayStation, and how the homeless guy has only one shoe the first time we see him, but then he has two shoes when the main character sees him outside the window. Also, the pacing is a bit slower than it could have been and the audio is a bit inconsistent. Otherwise, great short film. I really enjoyed it.
song doesn't have the carti feature in the released version but I don't think it needs it; it would've been really really nice to have though. It's a shame but Yung Lean has good vision so I trust him.